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= Welcome to __BEN AND REED'S__ Domestic Violence Project Wikispace =

michael walden: i can tell that you guys spent time on this since and since our topics are similar i really got the information

Leah: This is great! The layout is good and i love the design. Good, in depth paper: lots of information! Nice action plan, too. And everything was very organized.

Courtney It looks like you spent a lot of time on this which makes your wiki really good. I liked the format of your outline (very clean and easy to read) and how people could get a sense of what your going to talk about.

John Very good in depth information and you guys spent a klot of time on this, good work

Daniel Sperling I think that both of you guys did really well. I can tell you have done a lot of research by how much you have written. Also I think that you guys have divided the work up evenly and that is why your wiki is so good.

Ellery The focus on a helpful organization for cases of domestic violence in our area was very good. I really enjoyed your paper, but I thought it could be improved if "I" and "we" were not used. Your wiki is very organized, which made it easy for me to navigate. It seems that the two of you worked well together, because the paper flowed from section to section without seeming like it was written by two different authors.

Helen Samuel I thought your work was very nice and interesting to read about, and really made me want to know more. You mention it's usually men that do the abusing, it definitely made me wonder what percentage of women were ever the abuser. The paper was great and I agree with Ellery; I love the fact that you put it the help that is available in our city. The only critique about your paper that I would have is, as the information was clear, although with some repetitions, the two paragraph format confused me a bit. In your outline you have four paragraphs.

Aidan Brooks It is very clear that you guys spent a ton of time on your project and i think that shows in your paper and your research. Although you guys were talking about all of the projects to stop domestic violence only one was named throughout the entire thing.

Martha Ben and Reed, your paper was very good. You had a good outline and covered some important material. Your paper contained more of an action plan than your action plan, however. You could have included aspects of education and how awareness about domestic violence can be raised, how it might be prevented, and how men who abuse women might be helped to stop. I would like to have liked to hear more about your interaction with the people at the agencies you contacted in your action plan.